-- Posted by thatgirl9459 at 6:55 pm on July 10, 2009 I wrote this a couple of months ago...I don't know exactly why I wrote it. I guess I was feeling a little depressed and this is what came of it... Rescue me, Break me out of this prison. Release me, Emancipate me from this perdition. Liberate me, Untwine these bindings. Redeem me, Sanctify my being. Amend me, Heal me from this corruption. Ennoble me, Vindicate this demoralization. Manumit me, Rid me of this burden. Resurrect me, Revive me from this depression. Awaken me, Commence my restoration. Free me, Open the gateway to my heaven. -- Posted by als13 at 6:56 pm on July 10, 2009 thats good -- Posted by RosabellaRai at 6:57 pm on July 10, 2009 wow. -- Posted by IGotAddicted at 7:00 pm on July 10, 2009 thats impressive. -- Posted by poptartweirdo at 7:01 pm on July 10, 2009 deep? -- Posted by thatgirl9459 at 7:03 pm on July 10, 2009 The sad part is my English teacher didn't know what two of those words meant... I had to get out the dictionary and show her... -- Posted by Poetic Believer at 8:30 am on July 19, 2009 And you think you have no talent? Darlin, you're a better writer than me. -- Posted by thatgirl9459 at 3:10 pm on July 19, 2009 Quote: from Vampire Angel at 8:30 am on July 19, 2009 And you think you have no talent? Darlin, you're a better writer than me. Thanks...but I'm not better than you...you're more imaginative then me...I just write a good poem every now and then...