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-- Posted by bananawhore at 6:17 pm on July 5, 2009
the grammar, spelling, punctuation etc havnt been fixed yet as it's a first draft. also what do you think of it quality wise? cracked with age mature skin appears to be a guide as to which direction to follow but the chain and device held on your ankle may be pushing you off the course Escapism may be your thing and your set to find a place, sure as hell worse than the last to stop and jump from the clock tower fly from the ties of reality with your bones in splints,plans set in ruins and fractured bits can't you see the old map knows more than you think don't you see now diamond clocks arent such a rarity as nothing else as quite as unyielding
-- Posted by newmie66 at 6:18 pm on July 5, 2009
Growing up?
-- Posted by cutie2 at 6:26 pm on July 5, 2009
I can't figure it out at all :( I'll try. Cracked with age... an old person. Who doesn't like reality and tends to try and avoid it - but by avoiding it, he/she's just carving out an unhappy life.
-- Posted by bananawhore at 7:07 pm on July 5, 2009
not quite haha but closish
-- Posted by cjcat at 11:26 pm on July 6, 2009
is it comparing life to a prison and we dream to break free from that cell
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