-- Posted by Porcelina at 11:51 am on Jan. 7, 2009 It doesn't look polished yet/something's wrong. Critiques pleaaaase. -- Posted by Molfsontan at 11:51 am on Jan. 7, 2009 Her left eye looks...wrong. -- Posted by Lulu Nobody at 11:53 am on Jan. 7, 2009 Is that hair in front of her eye on the right side of the picture? It looks awkward, maybe try and accent the shading there and the hair so that they're more separated. The space between the eyes feels a little too big, but it might just be because the eye on the left is mixing awkwardly with the hair. -- Posted by K r E s C e N d O at 11:53 am on Jan. 7, 2009 Very nice. I see nothing wrong, to be honest. -- Posted by SpasticTurnip at 11:54 am on Jan. 7, 2009 Quote: from Molfsontan at 7:51 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 Her left eye looks...wrong. I agree. -- Posted by 2kewl4u2know at 11:54 am on Jan. 7, 2009 The left side of her face.  The cheek-line looks odd, and the eye and eyebrow are flat.  Also, the upper part of her arm, it makes he shoulder look like it's too high up or dislocated from her body.  I don't, the whole arm kind of looks funny the longer I look at it. Otherwise, I like it. -- Posted by santana 08 at 11:54 am on Jan. 7, 2009 Fix the left side of her face. Near her eye -- Posted by ArtFreak at 11:54 am on Jan. 7, 2009 her left eye looks a little odd and the eyebrows might need a little more work colourwise but in general the features are great. I really like it. -- Posted by DemolitionxXxLover at 12:01 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 I agree about the eye thing. Though honestly, if I just saw this picture without you asking to find something wrong I wouldn't have noticed. -- Posted by Porcelina at 12:02 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 I can't figure out what it is that is wrong with her left eye, but yes I agree that there is something wrong with them. The distance between them is actually fine, it's something with the eye . . . The hair does need some work to, but as for the style of it that's always how I do it. The dimensions of her arm are off mostly because, as it's pretty clear, the edges are completely rough. But is it something more than that? -- Posted by 2kewl4u2know at 12:04 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 Quote: from Porcelina at 2:02 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 I can't figure out what it is that is wrong with her left eye, but yes I agree that there is something wrong with them. The distance between them is actually fine, it's something with the eye . . . The hair does need some work to, but as for the style of it that's always how I do it. The dimensions of her arm are off mostly because, as it's pretty clear, the edges are completely rough. But is it something more than that? I think mostly it's just the eye.  I think the problem with it is, as I said, it looks flat.  There's really no dimension to it like the right eye.  The left eye also looks to be a bit bigger and more round than oblong.  I don't know, that's kind of what it looks to me at least. -- Posted by RedNoir at 12:04 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 She looks worried. -- Posted by sparkyjo at 12:12 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 Her left eye/hair by that just doesn't look right. THe part of the arm that seems to be her shoulder looks kind of wrong also.... or maybe it's just her arm? Better than I could do though!! :) SJ -- Posted by xPicturesOfYou3 at 12:21 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 The left side just kind of looks, wrongish. -- Posted by big mac at 12:22 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 Obviously the hair is supposed to be over her left eye, correct? What you've done wrong is if you examine the hair that is BEHIND the neck, you've made the hair over her eye almost the same value and colour. This gives the Illusion that the hair is behind her eye, just like the hair is behind her neck, making her grotesque looking. -- Posted by EarthEmpire at 7:12 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 I don't think her pupils are looking at the same point. Looks like she has a lazy eye or something. -- Posted by austin s23 at 7:29 pm on Jan. 11, 2009 i think the arm is really misshapen -- Posted by Porcelina at 9:17 pm on Jan. 11, 2009 Quote: from big mac at 3:22 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 Obviously the hair is supposed to be over her left eye, correct? What you've done wrong is if you examine the hair that is BEHIND the neck, you've made the hair over her eye almost the same value and colour. This gives the Illusion that the hair is behind her eye, just like the hair is behind her neck, making her grotesque looking. Good call! Thank you. I think I did manage to fix that. -- Posted by jacyl21 at 9:40 am on Jan. 14, 2009 left side