Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic Claire Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]austin s23[/m] at 7:29 pm on Jan. 11, 2009[quote]i think the arm is really misshapen [/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post Porcelina Posted at 11:51 am on Jan. 7, 2009 It doesn't look polished yet/something's wrong. Critiques pleaaaase.

Replies jacyl21 Posted at 9:40 am on Jan. 14, 2009 left side Porcelina Posted at 9:17 pm on Jan. 11, 2009 Quote: from big mac at 3:22 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 Obviously the hair is supposed to be over her left eye, correct? What you've done wrong is if you examine the hair that is BEHIND the neck, you've made the hair over her eye almost the same value and colour. This gives the Illusion that the hair is behind her eye, just like the hair is behind her neck, making her grotesque looking. Good call! Thank you. I think I did manage to fix that. austin s23 Posted at 7:29 pm on Jan. 11, 2009 i think the arm is really misshapen EarthEmpire Posted at 7:12 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 I don't think her pupils are looking at the same point. Looks like she has a lazy eye or something. big mac Posted at 12:22 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 Obviously the hair is supposed to be over her left eye, correct? What you've done wrong is if you examine the hair that is BEHIND the neck, you've made the hair over her eye almost the same value and colour. This gives the Illusion that the hair is behind her eye, just like the hair is behind her neck, making her grotesque looking. xPicturesOfYou3 Posted at 12:21 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 The left side just kind of looks, wrongish. sparkyjo Posted at 12:12 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 Her left eye/hair by that just doesn't look right. THe part of the arm that seems to be her shoulder looks kind of wrong also.... or maybe it's just her arm? Better than I could do though!! :) SJ RedNoir Posted at 12:04 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 She looks worried. 2kewl4u2know Posted at 12:04 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 Quote: from Porcelina at 2:02 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 I can't figure out what it is that is wrong with her left eye, but yes I agree that there is something wrong with them. The distance between them is actually fine, it's something with the eye . . . The hair does need some work to, but as for the style of it that's always how I do it. The dimensions of her arm are off mostly because, as it's pretty clear, the edges are completely rough. But is it something more than that? I think mostly it's just the eye.  I think the problem with it is, as I said, it looks flat.  There's really no dimension to it like the right eye.  The left eye also looks to be a bit bigger and more round than oblong.  I don't know, that's kind of what it looks to me at least. Porcelina Posted at 12:02 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 I can't figure out what it is that is wrong with her left eye, but yes I agree that there is something wrong with them. The distance between them is actually fine, it's something with the eye . . . The hair does need some work to, but as for the style of it that's always how I do it. The dimensions of her arm are off mostly because, as it's pretty clear, the edges are completely rough. But is it something more than that? DemolitionxXxLover Posted at 12:01 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 I agree about the eye thing. Though honestly, if I just saw this picture without you asking to find something wrong I wouldn't have noticed. ArtFreak Posted at 11:54 am on Jan. 7, 2009 her left eye looks a little odd and the eyebrows might need a little more work colourwise but in general the features are great. I really like it. santana 08 Posted at 11:54 am on Jan. 7, 2009 Fix the left side of her face. Near her eye 2kewl4u2know Posted at 11:54 am on Jan. 7, 2009 The left side of her face.  The cheek-line looks odd, and the eye and eyebrow are flat.  Also, the upper part of her arm, it makes he shoulder look like it's too high up or dislocated from her body.  I don't, the whole arm kind of looks funny the longer I look at it. Otherwise, I like it. SpasticTurnip Posted at 11:54 am on Jan. 7, 2009 Quote: from Molfsontan at 7:51 pm on Jan. 7, 2009 Her left eye looks...wrong. I agree. Most recent 15 of 18 previous replies displayed.