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thatgirl9459 Posted at 7:14 pm on July 10, 2009
Now I have no clue why I wrote this one...it's actually kind of disturbing...The words were just like flowing out of me...And actually I never finished it...So this is all I've got...

It's surrounding me,
I can feel it, seeping.
It's drowning me,
I can't breathe, suffocating.

It wants me,
Always wants me, stalking.
Cold hands, slithering along my skin,
Groping, looking for...something.

Strong, seamless arms envelop me,
Too tight, squeezing.
I struggle,
Trying, to break free, screaming.


That's all I've got...and it's not your normal poem, I guess.

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thatgirl9459 Posted at 3:06 pm on July 19, 2009
Quote: from Vampire Angel at 6:57 pm on July 18, 2009

Quote: from thatgirl9459 at 8:31 pm on July 18, 2009

Quote: from Vampire Angel at 3:58 pm on July 18, 2009

Wait...
  This... scene was in my dream.

 

 really? When?


A couple of nights ago..  
Btw Mom ungrounded me early. Good behavior. :)


Yay! Monady I'm going to B-ham to get my new glasses...

Poetic Believer Posted at 6:57 pm on July 18, 2009
Quote: from thatgirl9459 at 8:31 pm on July 18, 2009

Quote: from Vampire Angel at 3:58 pm on July 18, 2009

Wait...  
 This... scene was in my dream.

really? When?


A couple of nights ago..
Btw Mom ungrounded me early. Good behavior. :)

thatgirl9459 Posted at 6:31 pm on July 18, 2009
Quote: from Vampire Angel at 3:58 pm on July 18, 2009

Wait...
This... scene was in my dream.

really? When?

Poetic Believer Posted at 3:58 pm on July 18, 2009
Wait...
This... scene was in my dream.
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