Quoting Post Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic Poem Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] Quote: from [m]thatgirl9459[/m] at 6:55 pm on July 10, 2009[quote]I wrote this a couple of months ago...I don't know exactly why I wrote it. I guess I was feeling a little depressed and this is what came of it... Rescue me, Break me out of this prison. Release me, Emancipate me from this perdition. Liberate me, Untwine these bindings. Redeem me, Sanctify my being. Amend me, Heal me from this corruption. Ennoble me, Vindicate this demoralization. Manumit me, Rid me of this burden. Resurrect me, Revive me from this depression. Awaken me, Commence my restoration. Free me, Open the gateway to my heaven.[/quote] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post thatgirl9459 Posted at 6:55 pm on July 10, 2009 I wrote this a couple of months ago...I don't know exactly why I wrote it. I guess I was feeling a little depressed and this is what came of it... Rescue me, Break me out of this prison. Release me, Emancipate me from this perdition. Liberate me, Untwine these bindings. Redeem me, Sanctify my being. Amend me, Heal me from this corruption. Ennoble me, Vindicate this demoralization. Manumit me, Rid me of this burden. Resurrect me, Revive me from this depression. Awaken me, Commence my restoration. Free me, Open the gateway to my heaven.

Replies thatgirl9459 Posted at 3:10 pm on July 19, 2009 Quote: from Vampire Angel at 8:30 am on July 19, 2009 And you think you have no talent? Darlin, you're a better writer than me. Thanks...but I'm not better than you...you're more imaginative then me...I just write a good poem every now and then... Poetic Believer Posted at 8:30 am on July 19, 2009 And you think you have no talent? Darlin, you're a better writer than me. thatgirl9459 Posted at 7:03 pm on July 10, 2009 The sad part is my English teacher didn't know what two of those words meant... I had to get out the dictionary and show her... poptartweirdo Posted at 7:01 pm on July 10, 2009 deep? IGotAddicted Posted at 7:00 pm on July 10, 2009 thats impressive. RosabellaRai Posted at 6:57 pm on July 10, 2009 wow. als13 Posted at 6:56 pm on July 10, 2009 thats good All 7 previous replies displayed.