Adding Reply Archived Topic: It will not be bumped to the top of the forum. Topic what do you think this poem is about Membername   Not a member? Sign Up Free (takes 20 seconds) Password   Forgotten your password? Post Font: Verdana Arial Black Georgia Comic Sans Impact   Size: Tiny Normal Big Huge   Color: Default Dark Red Red Orange Brown Green Olive Cyan Blue Dark Blue Indigo Black [ Check Spelling ] [ Post Preview ] [ LiveTags ] FAQ Keyword Search: Post Options Favorites Manager Notify me of new replies to this topic by email Notify me of new replies to this topic by private message Original Post bananawhore Posted at 6:17 pm on July 5, 2009 the grammar, spelling, punctuation etc havnt been fixed yet as it's a first draft. also what do you think of it quality wise? cracked with age mature skin appears to be a guide as to which direction to follow but the chain and device held on your ankle may be pushing you off the course Escapism may be your thing and your set to find a place, sure as hell worse than the last to stop and jump from the clock tower fly from the ties of reality with your bones in splints,plans set in ruins and fractured bits can't you see the old map knows more than you think don't you see now diamond clocks arent such a rarity   as nothing else as quite as unyielding

Replies cjcat Posted at 11:26 pm on July 6, 2009 is it comparing life to a prison and we dream to break free from that cell bananawhore Posted at 7:07 pm on July 5, 2009 not quite haha but closish cutie2 Posted at 6:26 pm on July 5, 2009 I can't figure it out at all :( I'll try. Cracked with age... an old person. Who doesn't like reality and tends to try and avoid it - but by avoiding it, he/she's just carving out an unhappy life. newmie66 Posted at 6:18 pm on July 5, 2009 Growing up? All 4 previous replies displayed.