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What's wrong with this sentence? (German)
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Ab morgen werde ich Fruchtsaft statt Brausen trinken, da ich keine Lochen in meinen Zähne bekommen möchte.

My teacher has underlined the end of Zähne, which means something is supposed to go there, but I don't know what.

Don't bother replying if you can't help.

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I dont actually see any mistake... O_O

Edit: Gah, I cant read. I assume you mean teeth.

It could well be the meine, I dont see whats wrong with the Zähne .....

Post edited at 11:33 am on Sep. 10, 2009 by Azzurro

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Should it not be meine? But I'm not sure why she underlined the end of the word.

EDIT: I'm not sure but maybe she underlined the 'e' on zahne to indicate that it was plural and then needed meine? Sorry it's been a whole year since my last German lesson.

Post edited at 11:38 am on Sep. 10, 2009 by ronda

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From tomorrow I will drink fruit juice instead of showers because I would not get any holes in my teeth

thast what you wrote   so you tell me

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Quote: from im your freak at 7:32 pm on Sep. 10, 2009

From tomorrow I will drink fruit juice instead of showers because I would not get any holes in my teeth

thast what you wrote so you tell me


I too am capable of C&Ping into online translators...

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Well, theres nothing wrong with Zähne so I can only assume its the meinen..

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Quote: from Periwinkle at 2:34 pm on Sep. 10, 2009

Quote: from im your freak at 7:32 pm on Sep. 10, 2009

From tomorrow I will drink fruit juice instead of showers because I would not get any holes in my teeth  

 thast what you wrote   so you tell me


I too am capable of C&Ping into online translators...


that is my thoughts also, but as to your "mistake" goes, i dont see it myself...

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maybe you need to put die Zahne? I don't know I am only in 101. my guess is useless

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It should be "in meinen Zähnen" because it's dative and you add an -n to the end of plural nouns in the dative (generally).

Also, it should be "Löcher" if you mean holes, not "Lochen".

Also, what do you mean by "Brausen"?

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Zähnen, instead of Zähne
Löcher, instead of Lochen
and Brause, oder Limonade (depends on where in Germany you are).


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