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To wake?
Replies: 2Last Post Nov. 7 3:33am by Anonymous
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If I should wake tomorrow,
I may find myself a rich man,
one clothed in silks,
In riches,
And waited on hand and foot

If I should make tomorrow
Could I find myself a pauper
With naught but the clothes I wear
To wait on hand and foot

If I should wake tomorrow
would I be myself
And neither wait on hand nor foot
nor be waited on hand or foot
because to simply be is to be enough


8:00 pm on Nov. 6, 2009
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I actually really liked it. A ton better than I could probably write, but it's a tad bit bothersome how there are commas in the first stanza and then they just stop. Maybe I'm just weird.

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Drinking means consistancy goes out the window.

3:33 am on Nov. 7, 2009
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