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Replies: 7Last Post Nov. 6 2:16am by MoZ
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Are there any mistakes in this sentence?
I'd reeeeeally appreciate any help!

Parce que deux ans est un longe temps pour une compagnie comme Nikon de aller sans sortir un nouveau appareil-photo, ils a mise en vente aussi le D3000 cette annee.


Thank youuuuu!!


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You could try using an online translator to see.

Er, there's one called Babelfish.

Post edited at 5:39 pm on Nov. 4, 2009 by the mixed tape

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I'm incredibly tired, so I will probably get this wrong and won't radically reform it anyways, but...

Parce que deux ans est un longe temps pour une compagnie comme Nikon d'aller sans sortir un nouveau appareil-photo, ils a mise en vente aussi le D3000 comme cette année.

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go to wordtranslation.com
thats what my last year's french teacher made us do every day.

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Thanks a lot, guys!
You know somethings wrong when the guy from England speaks better french than the girl from Quebec. Lmao, I fail :(

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I do massively love France and the French... >_> In any case I only corrected a preposition and added an accent. It still reads like an English structure, for the record, it's probable that it's not right yet.

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'Bien que deux ans soit un long temps pour une compagnie comme Nikon d'aller sans lancer un nouveau appareil-photo, ils ont misé en vente le D3000 cette annee.'

Try that, i put the subjunctive in there, just to make it read a bit bitter - replaced sortir with lancer and conjugated avoir properly in your passé composé.

Hope this helps.



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