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Replies: 7 — Last Post July 19 3:10pm by thatgirl9459
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I wrote this a couple of months ago...I don't know exactly why I wrote it. I guess I was feeling a little depressed and this is what came of it...


Rescue me,
Break me out of this prison.
Release me,
Emancipate me from this perdition.

Liberate me,
Untwine these bindings.
Redeem me,
Sanctify my being.

Amend me,
Heal me from this corruption.
Ennoble me,
Vindicate this demoralization.

Manumit me,
Rid me of this burden.
Resurrect me,
Revive me from this depression.

Awaken me,
Commence my restoration.
Free me,
Open the gateway to my heaven.

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I believe in an eye for an eye, but I also
believe that through hardship comes success."

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thats good

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wow.

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thats impressive.

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deep?

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The sad part is my English teacher didn't know what two of those words meant...

I had to get out the dictionary and show her...

Post edited at 7:03 pm on July 10, 2009 by thatgirl9459

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And you think you have no talent? Darlin, you're a better writer than me.

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Quote: from Vampire Angel at 8:30 am on July 19, 2009
And you think you have no talent? Darlin, you're a better writer than me.

Thanks...but I'm not better than you...you're more imaginative then me...I just write a good poem every now and then...



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