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Daddy Dearest
Replies: 5Last Post July 9 1:53pm by heavyrhythm
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This song is about my biological father. People say I was molested by him, but I don't remember it. I hate him because he asked my (step)dad (I call him my dad because he's been in my life since I was 4.) to adopt my sister and I because he didn't want to pay child support. I mean, I'm his daughter. I just thought it was really shitty.

I am the tongue
That tells your lie
I am the fear
You try to hide
I am the child
You concieve
I am the thoughts
That you believe
I am the one
You smile too
I have thoughts
I hate you

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I'd rather spend my time near the birds
Than waste my life wishing I had wings


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I think you force the rhyme to muchh, I have a poem of the same nature. Sometimes free verse works best. want me to post for you?

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Quote: from XxRedneckBitchxX at 1:52 pm on July 9, 2009

I think you force the rhyme to muchh, I have a poem of the same nature. Sometimes free verse works best. want me to post for you?
I get htat alot actually. But honestly I don't force anything. I don't really sit around and think "what would rhyme with X word?" yano? It just comes...

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