Ok so i have been wring a story for a while and im not done but i would like it if someone would read it and tell me if its ok and what i need to inprove and stuff so here's the link so please read it and tell me if its good or bad and all that good stuff =]
yes i know i am lame for going on livejournal idgaf
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I think it would be better if you wrote about something you know about. So that you have first hand experience and the writing is more convincing. Just saying, I don't think your the age where all your friends are getting married etc.
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Quote: from blackbandaid at 10:57 pm on July 6, 2009
I think it would be better if you wrote about something you know about. So that you have first hand experience and the writing is more convincing. Just saying, I don't think your the age where all your friends are getting married etc.
Thanks.
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