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My poem
Replies: 5Last Post June 17 7:01am by Smartbutsexy
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( AloneAngel )


Wealthy Hobo
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As always, please tell me your interpretation.


It starts off with him
He is so poisoned he is dead inside
He passes it on to you
it starts off in your head
and slowly creeps down into your heart
filling it
until it dies
it creeps down and fills your body

As you walk through the woods
it creeps down through your feet
infecting the soil
into the roots of the trees
all the way up to the leaves
the poison turns it all red
the flowers, the branches, the leaves

Your own living room
you sit down on a favourite chair
to eat a favourite snack
the poison drips out through you
through your hands
your back, your legs, your arms
until the chair goes red,
then the food, then the entire room
blood red tears run from your eyes
As all you can see is red

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Everythings better when its Penguin!
The world would be a better place if we were all penguins.


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heybaby2009


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Thats really good :)

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Karlyjo


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thats good and im a writer so haha i just suck at spelling

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courtxoxo


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thats rlly good!

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GoldenMelody


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nice

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Words will always retain their power. Words offer the means to meaning,
and for those who will listen, the enunciation of truth.

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Smartbutsexy


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li love it...powerful words :)

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