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It doesn't look polished yet/something's wrong.
Critiques pleaaaase.

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Her left eye looks...wrong.

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Is that hair in front of her eye on the right side of the picture? It looks awkward, maybe try and accent the shading there and the hair so that they're more separated. The space between the eyes feels a little too big, but it might just be because the eye on the left is mixing awkwardly with the hair.

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Very nice. I see nothing wrong, to be honest.

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Quote: from Molfsontan at 7:51 pm on Jan. 7, 2009

Her left eye looks...wrong.

I agree.

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The left side of her face.  The cheek-line looks odd, and the eye and eyebrow are flat.  Also, the upper part of her arm, it makes he shoulder look like it's too high up or dislocated from her body.  I don't, the whole arm kind of looks funny the longer I look at it.

Otherwise, I like it.

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Fix the left side of her face. Near her eye

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her left eye looks a little odd
and the eyebrows might need a little more work colourwise but in general the features are great.
I really like it.

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I agree about the eye thing. Though honestly, if I just saw this picture without you asking to find something wrong I wouldn't have noticed.

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I can't figure out what it is that is wrong with her left eye, but yes I agree that there is something wrong with them. The distance between them is actually fine, it's something with the eye . . .
The hair does need some work to, but as for the style of it that's always how I do it.
The dimensions of her arm are off mostly because, as it's pretty clear, the edges are completely rough. But is it something more than that?

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Quote: from Porcelina at 2:02 pm on Jan. 7, 2009

I can't figure out what it is that is wrong with her left eye, but yes I agree that there is something wrong with them. The distance between them is actually fine, it's something with the eye . . .
The hair does need some work to, but as for the style of it that's always how I do it.
The dimensions of her arm are off mostly because, as it's pretty clear, the edges are completely rough. But is it something more than that?

I think mostly it's just the eye.  I think the problem with it is, as I said, it looks flat.  There's really no dimension to it like the right eye.  The left eye also looks to be a bit bigger and more round than oblong.  I don't know, that's kind of what it looks to me at least.

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She looks worried.

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Her left eye/hair by that just doesn't look right. THe part of the arm that seems to be her shoulder looks kind of wrong also.... or maybe it's just her arm? Better than I could do though!! :)

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The left side just kind of looks, wrongish.

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Obviously the hair is supposed to be over her left eye, correct?
What you've done wrong is if you examine the hair that is BEHIND the neck, you've made the hair over her eye almost the same value and colour. This gives the Illusion that the hair is behind her eye, just like the hair is behind her neck, making her grotesque looking.


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