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The LiveWire Writing Contest
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Replies: 111Last Post Sep. 14, 2008 6:43pm by SpRiNgS
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Membername: iinsurgent
Title of Piece: gigglesnortidontnamethings
Type of Piece: Poem
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i want to be with him on a beach
with large smooth rocks and subtle winds
with waves almost nonexistent, with people almost nonexistent
just us and the things that keep us alive.

i want to take all his little black baggies with little white rocks
and blend them together until it becomes unwanted crinkled powder
so he can no longer lie that it is safe

i want him to take the keys to his crap ass truck
and drive me to cities lit with nightlife
we'll sit where ever they will let us sit
and we'll watch people we don't know,
describing their life stories that probably never are
but it wont matter to us

and more than anything i want to hear him sing to me again
belting awkward melodies that crash together in the most ungraceful manner

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finnaly i throw my toung into your throught


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Quote: from Springs at 5:45 pm on June 26, 2008

I'm in

Membername: Springs
Title of Piece: Last adventure of the Crow
Type of Piece (, Short Story.):  
Piece:


In order for the post to count, you have to actually post the peice here. No editing aloud, remember? Repost the whole thing, peice included.

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Quote: from NoNoNora383 at 6:34 pm on June 26, 2008

Quote: from Springs at 5:45 pm on June 26, 2008

I'm in  

 Membername: Springs  
 Title of Piece: Last adventure of the Crow  
 Type of Piece (, Short Story.):
 Piece:


In order for the post to count, you have to actually post the peice here. No editing aloud, remember? Repost the whole thing, peice included.


oh forgot

i'll post the whol e thing then and edit that to just say i've joined ok?

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Quote: from NoNoNora383 at 5:19 pm on June 26, 2008

Quote: from katyrose at 5:16 pm on June 26, 2008

For the contest, would i be able to write a song? Oh wait i dont think i can enter at my status nevermind.

You can enter nomatter your status. You can only be a judge if you're a blue bar tho. But songs are great!


okay ill start writing a new song tomorow.

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OMG.

I am so psyched about this!!!!!

You are like my hero, Nora, for making this.

Writing is my favorite thing in the world (I'm writing my own novel).

I'm getting on it right away.

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I said I'm impulsive.

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I will enter this, though I doubt I'll win.
Gotta be in it to win it though, as _________ once said.

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Membername: emma19911
Title of Piece: I Painted A Picture Of You
Type of Piece: Poem
Piece:
I painted a picture of you,
The colours were so dark,
Just like your personality,
I loved you,
Your eyes were as though they were on fire,
You're the light in my life,
You will keep me alive,
So if you leave,
I will have to go,
Because I can't live without you,
The picture of you was pure,
As though you where an angel,
Sent from heaven,
And brought to me,
You were my shining star,
So I paint this picture for you to know how great you are,
You have helped me through so much,
So I am glad that we are always in touch,
You are always here when I need you,
You are my shoulder to cry on,
Day or night you're always there,
All I have to do is pick up the phone and then you are here,
So this is why I painted the perfect picture,
Of the most perfect love of my life,
So hang this up on the wall,
For the world to know that you glow.

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Title: The Game
Type: Poem
Work:

A deep breath
Eyes close to darkness
Nose to dirt, out I step
The tan white plate under my feet
The cool feel of the bat in my hands
I am ready.

Time slows for awhile
My eyes see his eyes
His see the catchers hands
A hint of a smile
Betraying his frown
He pulls back
Releasing the object many loathe and adulate
I am the ball.

A solid crack
Time snaps back
Away flies the ball
Like a mouse from a cat
I feel the crisp air as i run
Feel te loose dirt under my feet
See the guard as i rush toward him
And over he plate
I am safe.

Next comes second, the ball far gone
No pain to be noticed from my flatout run
The next lineman looking
But no hope to stop me
I am fast.

The third is coming
I can feel its presence
Kno in my mind
There will be no resistance
Cross over the last
On my way home
I am winning.

Destiny is within my grasp
Just a few feet left to dash
No threat to my win in sight
Cross over the final base
For the last time
I am victory.

I look up
My eyes open
Over the empty field
I sigh aloud
And put down the bat
Can no longer play even though
I am The Gme.

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Hopefully what you will see will not be your reflection.


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Membername: emma19911
Title of Piece: Getting Through This
Type of Piece: Poem
Piece:

I have to get through this,
Whatever it takes,
I need support,
However long it takes,
I can't see the sun because I am so sad,
I love the rain,
Because I always down,
I never smile,
Because I can't get through this,
It is never ending,
I don't know what to do,
I will never get through,
Because I am weak,
I need all the help,
That I can get from you,
I need someone whose there,
Time after time,
I need the help of you,
Or I won't get through,
There is a black cloud above me,
Because I am so down,
But you don't see this,
Even though it's always been there,
You don't see my true colours,
Even if there black or even blue,
To get through this I need you,
To support me no matter what,
Even when the days for me are blue,
With the nights so lonely,
I've thought it through,
All I need is your help,
To get through.

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emma has a good chance at winning

Post edited at 5:05 pm on June 28, 2008 by SpRiNgS

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Membername: emma19911
Title of Piece: I Wonder
Type of Piece: Poem
Piece:

As I see the stars,
I wonder why,
Why this pain,
Why do I feel like this?
I hate this confusion,
I can't control it,
I wish I knew how,
Then I could be happy,
And move on in life.

As I see the moon,
I wonder how,
How others deal,
Deal with the pain,
Do they move on?
Do they stay stuck?
Or do they search,
For happiness that doesn't exist.

As I look at the night sky,
I wonder where,
Where you are,
Where's the sun,
To lighten the pain,
To show happiness,
To make people feel good,
Where are you,
People need some light in life.

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Membername: emma19911
Title of Piece: Might've/Could've Been
Type of Piece: Poem
Piece:

As the tears fall,
I think of him,
And all the times,
That could've been,
The emotions of it,
The happiness but also pain,
All these things,
Make me cry,
As I think,
Of what might have been.

As I look around,
I see happy couples,
I think of me and him,
As if it was us,
Leaving a candle lit dinner,
Walking along the beach,
The kiss on the doorstep,
I feel a wave of pain,
To what I wish could be.

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 Membername: emma19911
Title of Piece: Remembering
Type of Piece: Poem
Piece:

Walking down the road,
Of my past memories,
Looking at what happened,
And how it's all affected me,
Looking at how badly,
When I see them,
It reminds me of different times,
Some memories of heartache,
Some of the good times,
Then the ones of great pain,
It always makes me wonder,
Is it worth the trip?
Of going down my memory lane,
Causing emotional trouble,
Whilst remembering times,
Best left in the past.

Other times memories have faded,
They seem hazy to remember,
However hard I try,
And however bad I want to remember,
There are shades of gray in my mind,
Mostly of my good times,
Those are the most difficult to remember,
But the ones worth the trip,
Of looking into my past,
Taking a long trip down memory lane,
Just to bring a smile to my face,
Remembering the good,
However remembering times long forgotten,
It just causes pain of what I truly miss.

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The Children of New Eden

"The story begins in the library at the edge of Existence......."

* A tall man, appearing to be quite aged, with long flowing grey hair, comes from behind a bookcase, with a large glowing book. He looks ahead and see a group of children smiling at him. The children themselves, look quite odd, with freakish hair colors. One boy, with blue skin but silver hair tugs at the mans robes*

"Librarian Id, Librarian Id, it's storytime, isn't it? what's the story today?

Librarian Id, the old man, smiled and knelt down. "Today's story is the Rise and Fall of New Eden"

At the end of that sentence all the children went quiet.. One, a girl with completely white eyes and red skin full of scales, said "My dad said that story's forbidden"

"Well here, at the edge o the universe, it isn't my child....so let's begin..."

As the Librarian opens the book an image springs to life. An image o  a beautiful planet, full oflife and fantastical ccreatures upon it. He then speaks. "The plaent of New Eden was one of magnificence, full of beings of wonder and creautres of amazement. One o those beings, was The Wize One Idara, the leader of all of New eden. He presided over the peace of his planet, along with his son, Raah. For you see, New Eden's peace was always threatened by the evil that lay next door...


"CATACLYSMOS!? the same child, the first one to question the Librarian shouted

"Yes.....the planet Catacllysmos, a place so horrible,full of unimaginable evil. think about every evil deed, person, or creature you've ever met.now combine it into a big ball with the hatred of the yeras locked around it and you have it. The people born from that rock were all corrupt in their own way...especially their leader, Maximus Non. Non was a being born out of hate and spite between even his own parents, so of course it was no suprise the mere sight of New Eden in the horizon of his planet disgusted him. He sent the first volley of skysharks, horible creatures that fly throught he sky and tear children apart to the planet, threatening it's peace. Luckily, thepeople of New Eden fought heroically for their freedom....and thus the million year war began. Being gods, the million years didn't wear on tehm but for Idara, the constant fighting did.....escalating to cosmic propportions, weapons being made from stars, asteroids being called down upon planets, was horrible

Untilt he peace treaty was proposed. The proposed treaty was to be signed at a neutral point, on their shared moon. All the elite were gathered there, except for one. Idar wasn't as wise as he claimed to be...as he was tricked by Cataclysmos chief of illusions, Vindaloo. he was locked on their moon and saw as his own planet was destroyed by Non and his men. Idara, watching his own planet destroyed, nearly lost his mind. He wandered the cosmos in a rage, destroying whatever he came across, until he came ot the edge of reality....where he met, "The Voice". THe voice told him to bide his time, until one day.......a child would gather those together who would rebuild New Eden. he now sits at the edge of existence, waiting"


The kids looked athte Librarian, and then turned to each other. before they knew it, he was gone



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Title of Piece: Broken Arrow
Type of Piece: Poem
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The thoughts were flashing through my head
As they kicked and punched and watched as I bled
I grunted and screamed and watched them all
While they stood there and watched
While I was taking the fall
It was in my pocket, shouting my name
I had thoughts to grab it as my eyes turned to flame
I reached in my pocket to take it out
But one of them saw me and turned to the others to shout
"She has a gun, she has a gun!"
And they all stopped to glance -
I couldn't grab it in time, I didn't even have a chance
They grabbed it in a flash and aimed it at me
But the one with the gun
Was wearing a broken arrow key
That key was a gift, from myself to he
It symbolized our love but he wanted to be free
He didn't love me anymore, or so he had said
But he was taking a test with the gun aimed at my head
If he shot, then I knew, our love wasn't real
And if he didn't, he'd prove that he feels what I feel
"What are you waiting for?" I had heard somebody say
But I prayed he wouldn't listen and let me live another day
"You fucking pussy, shoot her! Shoot her ass dead!"
But he didn't, he turned, and shot his friend's head
Stunned, the others stood and watched their friend die
They couldn't say anything; not even ask why
He looked at his friends and said
"Leave her alone. She's my girl and I love her,
Or I'll crush you bone by bone."
With his word he had fled and left us to be
Then he gazed in my eyes as I looked at his key
"You still have that key? After all we've been through?"
He just smiled and replied, "I love you, I really do."
I smiled and cried and put my hands over his-
Moved his body close to me, and gave him a kiss
"I love you," I said, "I love you so much."
As my body melted with his every touch
"I'm sorry I let them hurt you," he said with his heart.
"I promise to never hurt you, and we'll never be apart."
"I'm sorry," he said, "For everything I've done.
I realized I ahd lost more than I'd won."

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