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Replies: 111 Last Post Sep. 14, 2008 6:43pm by SpRiNgS
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Day Old Blues
Soothsayer
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I will enter this, though I doubt I'll win. Gotta be in it to win it though, as _________ once said.
------- you're no oil painting.
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Corrupted Innocence
♥Lost and Alone♥
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Membername: emma19911 Title of Piece: I Painted A Picture Of You Type of Piece: Poem Piece: I painted a picture of you, The colours were so dark, Just like your personality, I loved you, Your eyes were as though they were on fire, You're the light in my life, You will keep me alive, So if you leave, I will have to go, Because I can't live without you, The picture of you was pure, As though you where an angel, Sent from heaven, And brought to me, You were my shining star, So I paint this picture for you to know how great you are, You have helped me through so much, So I am glad that we are always in touch, You are always here when I need you, You are my shoulder to cry on, Day or night you're always there, All I have to do is pick up the phone and then you are here, So this is why I painted the perfect picture, Of the most perfect love of my life, So hang this up on the wall, For the world to know that you glow.
------- Dreaming Of A Day Where Things Are Different! Fruitlady is my Wifey ♥The Love Group Is Back♥
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drjpk
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member name: drjpk Title: The Game Type: Poem Work: A deep breath Eyes close to darkness Nose to dirt, out I step The tan white plate under my feet The cool feel of the bat in my hands I am ready. Time slows for awhile My eyes see his eyes His see the catchers hands A hint of a smile Betraying his frown He pulls back Releasing the object many loathe and adulate I am the ball. A solid crack Time snaps back Away flies the ball Like a mouse from a cat I feel the crisp air as i run Feel te loose dirt under my feet See the guard as i rush toward him And over he plate I am safe. Next comes second, the ball far gone No pain to be noticed from my flatout run The next lineman looking But no hope to stop me I am fast. The third is coming I can feel its presence Kno in my mind There will be no resistance Cross over the last On my way home I am winning. Destiny is within my grasp Just a few feet left to dash No threat to my win in sight Cross over the final base For the last time I am victory. I look up My eyes open Over the empty field I sigh aloud And put down the bat Can no longer play even though I am The Gme.
------- When the end finally comes, there will be only you and the enemy. Hopefully what you will see will not be your reflection.
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7:03 pm on June 27, 2008 | Joined: Mar. 2007 | Days Active: 106 Join to learn more about drjpk Missouri, United States | Straight Male | Posts: 631 | Points: 1,723
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Corrupted Innocence
♥Lost and Alone♥
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Membername: emma19911 Title of Piece: Getting Through This Type of Piece: Poem Piece: I have to get through this, Whatever it takes, I need support, However long it takes, I can't see the sun because I am so sad, I love the rain, Because I always down, I never smile, Because I can't get through this, It is never ending, I don't know what to do, I will never get through, Because I am weak, I need all the help, That I can get from you, I need someone whose there, Time after time, I need the help of you, Or I won't get through, There is a black cloud above me, Because I am so down, But you don't see this, Even though it's always been there, You don't see my true colours, Even if there black or even blue, To get through this I need you, To support me no matter what, Even when the days for me are blue, With the nights so lonely, I've thought it through, All I need is your help, To get through.
------- Dreaming Of A Day Where Things Are Different! Fruitlady is my Wifey ♥The Love Group Is Back♥
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Corrupted Innocence
♥Lost and Alone♥
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Membername: emma19911 Title of Piece: I Wonder Type of Piece: Poem Piece: As I see the stars, I wonder why, Why this pain, Why do I feel like this? I hate this confusion, I can't control it, I wish I knew how, Then I could be happy, And move on in life. As I see the moon, I wonder how, How others deal, Deal with the pain, Do they move on? Do they stay stuck? Or do they search, For happiness that doesn't exist. As I look at the night sky, I wonder where, Where you are, Where's the sun, To lighten the pain, To show happiness, To make people feel good, Where are you, People need some light in life.
------- Dreaming Of A Day Where Things Are Different! Fruitlady is my Wifey ♥The Love Group Is Back♥
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Corrupted Innocence
♥Lost and Alone♥
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Membername: emma19911 Title of Piece: Might've/Could've Been Type of Piece: Poem Piece: As the tears fall, I think of him, And all the times, That could've been, The emotions of it, The happiness but also pain, All these things, Make me cry, As I think, Of what might have been. As I look around, I see happy couples, I think of me and him, As if it was us, Leaving a candle lit dinner, Walking along the beach, The kiss on the doorstep, I feel a wave of pain, To what I wish could be.
------- Dreaming Of A Day Where Things Are Different! Fruitlady is my Wifey ♥The Love Group Is Back♥
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Corrupted Innocence
♥Lost and Alone♥
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Membername: emma19911 Title of Piece: Remembering Type of Piece: Poem Piece: Walking down the road, Of my past memories, Looking at what happened, And how it's all affected me, Looking at how badly, When I see them, It reminds me of different times, Some memories of heartache, Some of the good times, Then the ones of great pain, It always makes me wonder, Is it worth the trip? Of going down my memory lane, Causing emotional trouble, Whilst remembering times, Best left in the past. Other times memories have faded, They seem hazy to remember, However hard I try, And however bad I want to remember, There are shades of gray in my mind, Mostly of my good times, Those are the most difficult to remember, But the ones worth the trip, Of looking into my past, Taking a long trip down memory lane, Just to bring a smile to my face, Remembering the good, However remembering times long forgotten, It just causes pain of what I truly miss.
------- Dreaming Of A Day Where Things Are Different! Fruitlady is my Wifey ♥The Love Group Is Back♥
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SpRiNgS
only man to ever DDT the pope
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The Children of New Eden "The story begins in the library at the edge of Existence......." * A tall man, appearing to be quite aged, with long flowing grey hair, comes from behind a bookcase, with a large glowing book. He looks ahead and see a group of children smiling at him. The children themselves, look quite odd, with freakish hair colors. One boy, with blue skin but silver hair tugs at the mans robes* "Librarian Id, Librarian Id, it's storytime, isn't it? what's the story today? Librarian Id, the old man, smiled and knelt down. "Today's story is the Rise and Fall of New Eden" At the end of that sentence all the children went quiet.. One, a girl with completely white eyes and red skin full of scales, said "My dad said that story's forbidden" "Well here, at the edge o the universe, it isn't my child....so let's begin..." As the Librarian opens the book an image springs to life. An image o a beautiful planet, full oflife and fantastical ccreatures upon it. He then speaks. "The plaent of New Eden was one of magnificence, full of beings of wonder and creautres of amazement. One o those beings, was The Wize One Idara, the leader of all of New eden. He presided over the peace of his planet, along with his son, Raah. For you see, New Eden's peace was always threatened by the evil that lay next door... "CATACLYSMOS!? the same child, the first one to question the Librarian shouted "Yes.....the planet Catacllysmos, a place so horrible,full of unimaginable evil. think about every evil deed, person, or creature you've ever met.now combine it into a big ball with the hatred of the yeras locked around it and you have it. The people born from that rock were all corrupt in their own way...especially their leader, Maximus Non. Non was a being born out of hate and spite between even his own parents, so of course it was no suprise the mere sight of New Eden in the horizon of his planet disgusted him. He sent the first volley of skysharks, horible creatures that fly throught he sky and tear children apart to the planet, threatening it's peace. Luckily, thepeople of New Eden fought heroically for their freedom....and thus the million year war began. Being gods, the million years didn't wear on tehm but for Idara, the constant fighting did.....escalating to cosmic propportions, weapons being made from stars, asteroids being called down upon planets, was horrible Untilt he peace treaty was proposed. The proposed treaty was to be signed at a neutral point, on their shared moon. All the elite were gathered there, except for one. Idar wasn't as wise as he claimed to be...as he was tricked by Cataclysmos chief of illusions, Vindaloo. he was locked on their moon and saw as his own planet was destroyed by Non and his men. Idara, watching his own planet destroyed, nearly lost his mind. He wandered the cosmos in a rage, destroying whatever he came across, until he came ot the edge of reality....where he met, "The Voice". THe voice told him to bide his time, until one day.......a child would gather those together who would rebuild New Eden. he now sits at the edge of existence, waiting" The kids looked athte Librarian, and then turned to each other. before they knew it, he was gone
------- pressure becomes real only the moment we acknowledge that it can affect us
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bluerosedangel
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Membername: bluerosedangel Title of Piece: Broken Arrow Type of Piece: Poem Piece: The thoughts were flashing through my head As they kicked and punched and watched as I bled I grunted and screamed and watched them all While they stood there and watched While I was taking the fall It was in my pocket, shouting my name I had thoughts to grab it as my eyes turned to flame I reached in my pocket to take it out But one of them saw me and turned to the others to shout "She has a gun, she has a gun!" And they all stopped to glance - I couldn't grab it in time, I didn't even have a chance They grabbed it in a flash and aimed it at me But the one with the gun Was wearing a broken arrow key That key was a gift, from myself to he It symbolized our love but he wanted to be free He didn't love me anymore, or so he had said But he was taking a test with the gun aimed at my head If he shot, then I knew, our love wasn't real And if he didn't, he'd prove that he feels what I feel "What are you waiting for?" I had heard somebody say But I prayed he wouldn't listen and let me live another day "You fucking pussy, shoot her! Shoot her ass dead!" But he didn't, he turned, and shot his friend's head Stunned, the others stood and watched their friend die They couldn't say anything; not even ask why He looked at his friends and said "Leave her alone. She's my girl and I love her, Or I'll crush you bone by bone." With his word he had fled and left us to be Then he gazed in my eyes as I looked at his key "You still have that key? After all we've been through?" He just smiled and replied, "I love you, I really do." I smiled and cried and put my hands over his- Moved his body close to me, and gave him a kiss "I love you," I said, "I love you so much." As my body melted with his every touch "I'm sorry I let them hurt you," he said with his heart. "I promise to never hurt you, and we'll never be apart." "I'm sorry," he said, "For everything I've done. I realized I ahd lost more than I'd won."
------- "Whatever happens will be." Myspace
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